Moment in time

Name:Diego

Date:Tuesday 24th July

Learning Goal:

We are learning TO USE OUR SENSES to describe what we think is happening in the photo.

We are learning to use WOW! words like adjectives and verbs to add impact for our audience (people who read our writing).

Title:Normal way to travel

I heard the wind whooshing near my ear like a car zooming past, going in the other direction.

I saw a wild eagle Fly near me and vanish in the fog.

I felt frightened when the zipline was wobbling when I was trying to look at my friend      

I wondered if the zipline was going to snap and if I would fall to my death.